Thursday, April 14, 2016

Opinions writing preview activity


Apple refuses to violate privacy of users

1. Editors
2. How Apple refused the FBI to give them a "back door" into an iPhone.
3. "Although the phone could yield valuable information, we believe that the FBI is asking Apple for too much at the risk of all other iPhone owners."
4. Yes
5. No, they never said its ok if.. or its fine if.., they were very certain about their opinion.
6. No direct quotes, some paraphrasing.
7.  3rd POV

Drug dog investigators have students feeling as though their rights are being violated at school

1. Granger Coats
2.  The punishments of offenses are too severe.
3. "However, the current rules and handling of student offenses is flawed."
4. No
5. No, they don't show anything that meant unless...
6. Yes, from the AISD student code of conduct.
7. 1st person

Social media, back at it again

1. Alicia Molina
2. What happens when something on the internet is a hit.
3. "I think it's great that people are using their fame for good and they are not keeping it all to themselves, we need more people like Daniel and Josh who use their fame for good."
4. No
5. No, they didn't show Daniel and Josh themselves in a negative view.
6. Yes, from Josh.
7. 1st person

Beyonce causes controversy

1. Fuaad Ajaz
2. About how Beyonce's new music video is very controversial.
4. Yes many times, kept saying that they disliked the song but didn't say why.
5. No, they didn't say maybe if or anything like that.
6. Yes
7. 3rd person

Is the AP world history test worth it?

1. Mia Barbosa
2. About the AP world history test and how it was worth trying for.
3. "Considering all of the time, money and stress a students can save themselves by tempting to take the test for a fee of only $93 I believe it is a great idea to try."
4. No
5. No, they believed anyone could get the credit if they really tried.
6. No
7. 3rd + 1st POV

A. A hard news story has a lot more quotes from interviewed people. A hard news story does not have a direct opinion from the author, it has more facts. Finally, a hard news story has a real-life photo, not an art piece.

B. I think there were less photos because this was less of a news story and more of opinions, and you can't depict opinions very well with real-life photos.

C. New laws/policies, Controversies, and the presidential race/election, especially if there was a person writing for the major sides.

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